Then there is the way the teachers were portrayed as Maddie was investigated. It felt like this was forced to make the story work with little regard for reality. Someone as young as sixteen with no previous issues would be protected more even if they were being charged as an adult.

I'm also doubtful that a minor would be thrown into prison with felons on such circumstantial evidence. The local police would have to contact the guardian for anything like what was done in the book. AND they would NEVER be allowed to interview a student without their parent in the principals office. Nor would they spend the amount of resources stalking a sixteen year old on such circumstantial evidence. As a teacher, I saw so many things that just wouldn't happen in a school or with teenagers that I know.Įxamples? The FBI isn't going to be involved after only 24 hours of a person going missing. It's the FBI and school issues that just had me fuming mad. There are several things I'm just not buying at all. Second, for me, this story was too forced. There is a hint in the blurb that it is but Maddie's attraction to Aiden is such a miniscule part of the story that it didn't even come into play. Can she right things beforeįirst, this isn't a romance. Mysterious young admirer who may be connected to it all, Maddie's wholeĮxistence is about to be turned upside down.

A suspect for the investigation,Ī target for the murderer, and attracting the attentions of a Maddie is entangled in a homicide investigation, and more young peopleĭisappear and are later found murdered. When the boy goes missing on that exact date, law enforcement turns to Maddie. Use her ability to make extra money, Maddie identifies the quicklyĪpproaching death date of one client's young son, but because herĪbility only allows her to see the when and not the how, she’s unable to offer any more insight. That these mysterious digits are actually death dates, and just like Takes her father’s premature death for Maddie and her family to realize Her earliest memories are marked by these numbers, but it Series of unique digits hovering above the foreheads of each person sheĮncounters. High school junior, cursed with an eerie intuitive ability: she sees a

Source: Received an eBook copy in exchange for a fair and honest review.

Books like when by victoria laurie