But one short sentence after another becomes wearying in itself, so it’s important to vary the beat, and the look of the page. A page without paragraph indentations is like a bloc of Soviet housing. Not until something happens to upset Alfred’s happy life. Letters on the page have a life of their own. If Alfred is a successful businessman with a loving family and everything going great, that’s not a story. A story is a dynamic narrative with a beginning, middle, and end.

A story has a beat and a rhythm like a good song. A seductive narrative voice like Raymond Chandler. A fascinating situation, like Jurassic Park. A fascinating character, like Sherlock Holmes. How do i do that? I use every trick at my disposal. I seek to grab readers by the throat on the first page and drag them into the narrative to the exclusion of all else. Let’s start with the story of your mission. We hope you’ll enjoy our conversation with Mike below.

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